Birds C&C

[Erikah672]

Took these while working. Taken with 55-200mm Lens. C&C always more then welcome!

1. Pelican in flight

 

[tirediron]

Hard to tell at this small size, but they look sharp and well exposed. The centred appearance makes them look rather technical; that is something out of a nature textbook rather than art shots.

 

[Erikah672]

Hummm..... they posted smaller then i thought they would. I'll try other cropping and see what i come up with Thanks

 

[chito beach]

Think rule of thirds and place the eye as needed in one of the third intersects. it will help the compositions

 

[Erikah672]

Ok will try that too.... but that either means more empty space or a really close crop :er:

 

[chito beach]

Ok will try that too.... but that either means more empty space or a really close crop :er:

Or different crops. dont limit to the bottom 2 points but use the upper 2 also

 

[Erikah672]

Is this any better? Thanks for looking again

 

[chito beach]

CHA CHING!!!!!! those are much better! now if you can just sharpen them a tad LOL

 

[Erikah672]

CHA CHING!!!!!! those are much better! now if you can just sharpen them a tad LOL

Sharpening is easy, and a can do Had to delete the other ones since i was not thinking and deleted them from the flicker account after i uploaded the last ones:mrgreen:

 

[NikonNewbie]

Very nice!!
I love them all!

 

[jmthompson]

Those last ones look great! The composition gives the bird space to look into...very nice and much more natural!

 

[jaymac]

IMO:
The newer two are much, much better. The last one being my fav.

 

[Erikah672]

Those last ones look great! The composition gives the bird space to look into...very nice and much more natural!

IMO:
The newer two are much, much better. The last one being my fav.

Thanks

 

[Ron Evers]

Nice sharp well exposed shots.

 

[HikinMike]

Is this any better? Thanks for looking again

Yes, much better.

Looks like a Lincoln's Sparrow to me.