Birds Flying During Sunset - C&C Please

[Skedaddle]

I just happened to be outside when these birds flew across the sky as the sun was setting. Let me know what you think of it.

 

[Skedaddle]

*bump*

 

[DRoberts]

I think would greatly be improved by cropping just above and below the line of birds putting more emphisis on them. As it is they seem to be an incidental object in the photo rather than a key part.
Since you don't allow editing I have sent you a PM with an example.

 

[Skedaddle]

I recieved the PM and I really like how you cropped it. Thank you for showing me.

 

[Nikon_Nyc]

+1 on the crop work it would create a focus area. you kinda get lost in the clouds.