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Boat and Sunset C & C welcome!

HeryHe

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Hi guys,

The pictures below are the first time I took using my DSLR camera. What do you guys think about? what do I have to improve?
C & C are very welcome.

#1

Boat by hery.he, on Flickr

#2

Sunset by hery.he, on Flickr
 
I like them, except I prefer landscapes in landscape orientation. The wider persepective gives the landscape a more dramatic effect.
 
On #1 I might have framed the shot with a little more breathing room around the boat on the left and the bottom - there's nothing particularly interesting on the other side of the frame that you're trying to capture, and it would give the shot a less cramped feel. Specifically, I'd probably center the boat vertically, but leave it off-center horizontally such that the mast would lie on the first third. See Rule of thirds - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia just in case you haven't heard of that before.

I like #2 quite a bit!
 
These are nice. I particularly like #1 and actually like boat in the corner like that.
 
I like them, except I prefer landscapes in landscape orientation. The wider persepective gives the landscape a more dramatic effect.

I got it, itf. In this case, I just tried to get more focus on the boat and the reflection of the sun.
Next shot should be more look into the wider perspective to get more space.

On #1 I might have framed the shot with a little more breathing room around the boat on the left and the bottom - there's nothing particularly interesting on the other side of the frame that you're trying to capture, and it would give the shot a less cramped feel. Specifically, I'd probably center the boat vertically, but leave it off-center horizontally such that the mast would lie on the first third. See Rule of thirds - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia just in case you haven't heard of that before.

I like #2 quite a bit!

Thanks orion, seems my understanding of Rule of thirds needs to be improved..

These are nice. I particularly like #1 and actually like boat in the corner like that.

Thanks leftyplayer...
 

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