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Good composition! The eyes and lips are just magnets for my eyes.
 
This was the image I was talking about in my other thread! Total "AHA" moment! I did such minimal photoshop on it just slight enhancing here and there. I feel like I have discovered a new cure ;)
 
nice... probably the best image I have seen from you! Congrats!
 
It's a great image but to give a little critique I would have swept the debris off the brick and cloned out that tuft of green ;)
 
My first thought was: "Ah man... dress on the ground.." :)
 
you must be the most convincing photographer i know, to get a bride to lay down on a dirty floor on her wedding day - CONGRATS!
 
Very nicely executed.
 
Not wedding day.......I'm not there yet although I would love love love to do weddings. This is just my friend who just got married and is helping me out :)
 
It's a great image but to give a little critique I would have swept the debris off the brick and cloned out that tuft of green ;)

I liked the ruggedness of the floor but your right the green should of went!
 
It's a great image but to give a little critique I would have swept the debris off the brick and cloned out that tuft of green ;)

I liked the ruggedness of the floor but your right the green should of went!

I agree that the green should have went and possibly the débris, too, but if you get a chance to shoot a similar pose again, how about adding some carefully selected dead leaves? Just an off the cuff thought.

Good work! :D
 
I thought the same thing "why is that girl on the floor in her wedding dress" lol. Glad its not her 'day'. I think this is a nice photo but if you want serious critique I don't care for the pose. If a bride was to lay on the floor I would expect something more earthy....plush field or something kwim? Also her one elbow is bothering me, the way it sticks out. Regardless though this is very nice :)
 
Its ok. The exposure is great and her lips draw me in, but the angle the camera is at throws me off a bit. It's like she's bending around to look at you.
 
Its ok. The exposure is great and her lips draw me in, but the angle the camera is at throws me off a bit. It's like she's bending around to look at you.

Thanks for your critique This was more for the people have been helping me all on here for a while with lighting issues (my previous stuff was pretty bad!)And yes she is bending around to look at me we did multiple angles and shots here :)
 
Why is it "brides" when there is only one bride?
 

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