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It's pretty good! I like the different angles and textures. There is obviously a large blown out section, but it doesn't bother me too much.
Personal preference would be a tighter crop, maybe cropping about 20% on all sides. There's a line, maybe a wire or something going from the upper middle left towards the upper right that I find distracting.
Good angle, good subject, good eye!
 

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Good lines and color. I'd crop it, but only on the right. I don't think that other building (or other section) really adds anything.
 
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It's pretty good! I like the different angles and textures. There is obviously a large blown out section, but it doesn't bother me too much.
Personal preference would be a tighter crop, maybe cropping about 20% on all sides. There's a line, maybe a wire or something going from the upper middle left towards the upper right that I find distracting.
Good angle, good subject, good eye!
Good lines and color. I'd crop it, but only on the right. I don't think that other building (or other section) really adds anything.
Thank you for your feedback!! I will crop it when I will arrive home.
 

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building edit.jpg This is what I had in mind. Just my opinion. :)
 

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My pleasure. I also removed the wire and the crane, though the removal of the crane is not very well done.
 

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What do you think about this picture?
It's kind of weak in the shade areas. Otherwise you've composed a fairly good composition.

FYI: When photographing architecture, remember that all of the actual attributes of the building are the work of the architect. Your job as architectural photographer is to show us a unique or little-seen angle/view/attribute.
 

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