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Bus Stops - Feedback Welcomed

Cash1

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Hello Everyone,
Thought it might be interesting to catch some life at a bus stop. I am new and having fun but also looking to get better. Feedback is not only appreciated but welcomed. Thanks for looking!
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Almost every picture needs to be 'about' something.
The photographer needs to know exactly what he/she is photographing and why, then exposes, frames and focuses around that.

These are just sort of aimless and, imo, the conversion is very flat and lifeless.
 
I agree that conversions could use a little more impact, but I think when you have a series of images with a common theme, that becomes the "about". That said, I think some more careful cropping would definitely benefit the images.
 
Get closer it looks like you are hiding behind bushes and cars to take the photos.

Also the B&W images lack contrast. There are no true blacks in the images just grays.
 
Are you taking these from your car? If so that's creeeeeeeeeepy.
 

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