By The Sea

Donde · Feb 28, 2016

Daniela...from a visit to Isla Providencia (Colombian Caribbean) last week.

LarryLomona · Feb 28, 2016

Excellent !

FITBMX · Feb 28, 2016

It feels like her face could be a little sharper to me. But otherwise I really like it. Beautiful location, and model!

Donde · Feb 28, 2016

Thanks.I didn't do any sharpening. Will go back and take a look.

Granddad · Feb 29, 2016

... and maybe paint a touch more exposure on her face in LR? It's a lovely face, after all.

JacaRanda · Feb 29, 2016

Exposure in the hair would also help. Why am I even looking at the hair?

I'ts just too black imo.

cauzimme · Mar 1, 2016

You have wonderful decor, sadly, I think the face and her hair are too dark, she haves a bit of racoon eyes because of the light. Also the pose don't do nothing for me, if you would have her bring her legs on her ankle it would have been a nice line, not a big fan of the kneecap only, it's missing the legs...

bribrius · Mar 1, 2016

looks like the knee is up and she using the arm to cover a little fat roll on da belly. women often get that extra little skin pouch from c sections having children what have you. just a guess.

Nice photo though.

Donde · Mar 2, 2016

bribrius said:
looks like the knee is up and she using the arm to cover a little fat roll on da belly. women often get that extra little skin pouch from c sections having children what have you. just a guess.

Nice photo though.

Ha ha...she's nineteen, no kids, wants to slim down though.

tirediron · Mar 2, 2016

cauzimme said:
You have wonderful decor, sadly, I think the face and her hair are too dark, she haves a bit of racoon eyes because of the light. Also the pose don't do nothing for me, if you would have her bring her legs on her ankle it would have been a nice line, not a big fan of the kneecap only, it's missing the legs...

This. Exactly.

nf1 · Mar 2, 2016

cauzimme said:
You have wonderful decor, sadly, I think the face and her hair are too dark, she haves a bit of racoon eyes because of the light. Also the pose don't do nothing for me, if you would have her bring her legs on her ankle it would have been a nice line, not a big fan of the kneecap only, it's missing the legs...

Agree with this as well. Consider lighting the model using reflector or other way - this will bring the focus to her and create pleasing light on her.