C&C for a noob please!:)

[emily05]

these are some images i've taken over the past few months,
any comments/suggestions will be greatly appreciated!




166314_475073886516_546241516_6243664_6530944_n by emilyyy05, on Flickr

DSC03318 by emilyyy05, on Flickr

DSC03305 by emilyyy05, on Flickr

189451_10150116267806517_546241516_6899866_5563108_n by emilyyy05, on Flickr

DSC05231 by emilyyy05, on Flickr

 

[EmMcCon]

Welcome,
1) I like this one a lot but whatever that is in the top left corner should've been removed, could maybe be a bit lighter
2) Doesn't really do anything for me
3) Very nice photo but i noticed the background flower has a few petals in focus and the tips of the foreground flower are out of focus if you'd adjusted the focus just a little >.<
4) Awesome, but a bit to bright for me and the second flower is slightly distracting
5) It's a nice picture but it the subject isn't that intresting
6) Just a tiny bit to bright

Good luck,
EmMcCon

 

[skieur]

1. Emphasis on a centre of interest is often based on an ODD number of objects. Four deserts creates too much balance.
2. Too tightly framed and not sufficient visual interest.
3. The red flower in the background distracts the viewers attention from the yellow flower which is the centre of interest.
4. Move in closer and centre on the water droplets.
5. Great idea and composition but too tightly framed. Back up the camera a little.
6. Background is busy and distracting.

skieur

 

[D-B-J]

Be careful of clipping aspects off of some of your subjects. Like the last one is well composed, where the first is too tight of a crop.

 

[emily05]

thanks guys

 

[Neiby]

It may just be the monitor I'm on at work, but the white balance looks like it could be tweaked in the first two to warm them up. On this monitor they seem too blue and not warm, which doesn't make me want to reach out and eat some of them.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Those cupcakes look yummy.