C&C for my editing

[Sharfy]

i am doing this on my blog, what do you think about it?

 

[Trever1t]

A Robert Palmer video came to mind when I saw this .. I like #1 but the shadow/light in #2 is distracting a bit.

 

[Sharfy]

A Robert Palmer video came to mind when I saw this .. I like #1 but the shadow/light in #2 is distracting a bit.

Thanks ^^, I am now googling Robert Palmer..... I am kind of making fun with my shoots for my blog, and i want to learn more about editing

 

[Trever1t]

look at the "Addicted to Love" video

 

[Robin Usagani]

you are better of using collages with small white border than stitching it like you did. It looks like 1 photo but the background and the shadow doesnt make any sense. Just put borders around each photo spaced evenly.

 

[412 Burgh]

you are better of using collages with small white border than stitching it like you did. It looks like 1 photo but the background and the shadow doesnt make any sense. Just put borders around each photo spaced evenly.

At first I did think it was 1 photo.. and the background didn't make any sense.. and then I read the title... It looks nice, good job on the editing, it's just not my style for models/clothing line. It doesn't flow together since all the background are kind of chopped

 

[Geaux]

I don't really have much input on the stitching together, but the shots are all victims of too slow of a shutter and handshake it seems.

 

[Sharfy]

I don't really have much input on the stitching together, but the shots are all victims of too slow of a shutter and handshake it seems.

Thanks, SHUTTER:banghead: (you give me a hint of my shooting prob, I should have think of it everytime) Handshake also a big prob sometimes when i am not in the proper area to shoot

 

[Sharfy]

you are better of using collages with small white border than stitching it like you did. It looks like 1 photo but the background and the shadow doesnt make any sense. Just put borders around each photo spaced evenly.

At first I did think it was 1 photo.. and the background didn't make any sense.. and then I read the title... It looks nice, good job on the editing, it's just not my style for models/clothing line. It doesn't flow together since all the background are kind of chopped

Thanks I am always engage with this kind of event so as a beginner i just blog it and trying some presentation to work on

 

[Sharfy]

look at the "Addicted to Love" video

Hahaha yeay girls girls girls...... its kinda similar and i enjoy the vid ^^

you are better of using collages with small white border than stitching it like you did. It looks like 1 photo but the background and the shadow doesnt make any sense. Just put borders around each photo spaced evenly.

Thanks for the ides noted and will apply it on my next practices.....