C&C greatly appreciated - posing, composition, conversion

[CorrieMichael]

C&C please on composition, posing, and conversion thanks

 

[angelina]

Pose is alright, if a little... posed (would they ever sit that way in real life? The dude esp. looks a little stiff) Processing is ok but I'd go without the artificial vignette. Cute photo though, nicely framed, well exposed and very sweet. Great soft feeling with a nice DOF. You can still make out their setting but it doesn't distract from the subject.

 

[krystalynnephoto]

Conversion is awesome! I love how it turned out, in that aspect.. the vignette is way too heavy for my taste, and I agree with PP that the pose is odd.

 

[The_Traveler]

All of the guy & more but you clipped the female's feet?

looks like a missed framing to me.

edit:

(Sorry had to skip out before to play racketball)

Side of guy, essentially featureless and unimportant fills up more than half the frame and has room at his feet.
White shirt pulls the eye.
Woman with pregnancy belly in darker clothes has much less than half and her foot is clipped.

 

[binga63]

What Lew said
The woman is normally the accepted focus of most couple's pics
and if you are going to mainly focus on the male try and give him a pose that is complimentary and that doesn't make him look like his neck is all chin