Your copy needs to be edited differently. At least you didn't use comic sans. Since you've disabled cut/paste I'll just put down a couple of examples.
In "What to expect", under the photo shoot what exactly did you mean by suggesting your clients "...- ALWAYS feel free to churn in your opinon"? Is that an error?
Also your excessive use of ... to end a sentence is both distracting and off putting. Once, perhaps. Twice? FOUR times in one paragraph...
The Pricing Page is worse. White writing on Black is distracting. Inconsistent use of white border simply looks half-assed.
Under specials you simply have the word 'Consider'. As in...consider somone else?
Under the 'little bit about me', your inconsistent use of a period is distracting. You are going to either use them or not. Don't switch between formats in the same page. And you suggest that the client 'forget I'm there, and interact'. Well which one do you want? Interaction or forget about you?
Needs work. Hope you get things going. Your pictures are nice, but the presentation format of your website leaves much to be desired.
^^What they said. Especially the part about "churn in your own opinion." Sounds like "stewing in your own juices." I have NO idea what you are trying to convey with that statement, but I'm almost certain it isn't what I get from it.
To add to the editorial aspects of the web design: Is there a reason you've picked a different font for every single section? That just contributes to the unprofessional look of the site. Pick a scheme, pick two or three fonts and use them throughout the entire site. Google something like "fonts for good web design" and get some advice on how to use fonts to your advantage.
The font you've used in the "what to expect" section, in particular, I find almost unreadable. It's too small, too light and against that brighter background (brown? tan? dark peach? odd color...) I am just not willing to work that hard at reading it. Potential clients won't bother either.
You've got some typos as well.
In short, the whole thing is a Hodge Podge of design, color, fonts, photos. There's not "theme," no consistency and absolutely nothing to draw the visitor in and keep them there.
Wow, that sounds harsh. I've been on TPF too long.
Well, it's also true. Good web design is just as important as good photography, and just as hard to do, if you have no idea what you're doing.
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