C&C needed - is this good or junk?

[crashcart]

I took this shot and can't tell whether or not it is interesting or just boring and uninspired. Will someone with some experience/insight/opinion give me their thoughts on this. What makes it good. bad, etc.

I'd really like to get some takes on this.

 

[Turnerea]

Well I'm certainly new at this... but at least the subject is clear, and the diagonal is much better than straight on. Not sure why the L is cut off....and looking again I find the letters facing the other direction in the back a little distracting.

 

[crashcart]

Thanks for the input. The "L" ran right into the shingling of the roof (which you can see in the bottom corner) and if I left it in, it would have looked like crap. I didn't know if it had some linear/geometric quality to it or whether it was a jumbled mess.

 

[dhilberg]

What were you going for here? Do you like it?

It doesn't do anything for me personally. Try re-taking the shot at night when the neon lights are on. It might look kinda cool.

Or shoot the whole building? Maybe a wide-angle vertical shot from the bottom looking up. Hard to know without seeing it...

 

[undergroundquasi]

there's kind of to much going on in this photo.