C&C NSFW Practicing lighting

[MissCream]

Okay before I post this is it okay if I post an implied nude? She has jeans on, I just read the rules but I didn't see anything about it in them. My eyes are getting bad though so I could have missed it :lmao:

Posted below

 

[Compaq]

I approve.....

 

[bentcountershaft]

If you're worried about it then just link it.

 

[MissCream]

Well here she is!


Untitled by Ms. Cream, on Flickr

 

[bentcountershaft]

Her arms are distracting. You should reshoot with no arms in the way.

Lighting looks good to this inexperienced lighting guy.

 

[MissCream]

Her arms are distracting. You should reshoot with no arms in the way.

Lighting looks good to this inexperienced lighting guy.

Bahahahahahahahahahaha

 

[tevo]

Lighting could be softer imo. But still good ^^


oh and

 

[H4X1MA]

I can't think of anything clever >.<

I don't know jack about portraits, but the bottom half seems a bit dark compared to the top. That could be on purpose for all I know

 

[mishele]

For a female point of view... I don't find the picture overly flattering to to the model. My focus goes to her bony elbows. The way you have the lighting set up it makes them a focal point for me.
She is a beautiful model and the focus should be on one of her stronger features...=)

 

[MissCream]

For a female point of view... I don't find the picture overly flattering to to the model. My focus goes to her boney elbows. The way you have the lighting set up it makes them a focal point for me.
She is a beautiful model and the focus should be on one of her stronger features...=)

Thanks Mishele, I'll try and edit them so they aren't as... pointy outie

 

[MissCream]

The rest of the set from tonight is on flikr if anyone cares to look

 

[Derrel]

Just crop a little bit off the left hand side. Done.

 

[Compaq]

For a female point of view... I don't find the picture overly flattering to to the model. My focus goes to her boney elbows. The way you have the lighting set up it makes them a focal point for me.
She is a beautiful model and the focus should be on one of her stronger features...=)

Yup, bony elbows, that was the first thing I noticed too

 

[Robin Usagani]

Looks good but it looks like Tevo got a bony.

 

[vtf]

I like this one, very nice. Untitled | Flickr - Photo Sharing!
This one hawt. Untitled | Flickr - Photo Sharing! No bony elbows.