C&C on a few photos?

[nicholaslawson]

Still sticking what I think i'm reasonably good at

A lil bit of constructed criticism is always welcome.


DSCF2028 by NicholasLawson1993, on Flickr


DSCF1927 by NicholasLawson1993, on Flickr


DSCF2041 by NicholasLawson1993, on Flickr

 

[HomelessBoy]

Don't know why no one has replied. But #2 and #3 looks like you done something on long-exposure which is very creativity (even though I don't know why you made those lines).

#1 looks like your light source is from a car or some sort which I think it's not so effective. I would've shot these pictures more earlier and used ambient light.

 

[spacefuzz]

I like #3 but want it rotated CCW a bit.

 

[KmH]

In #1 a light hidden behind the car but facing the camera would have been nice, as would have a light in the passenger compartment.

For me, #2 and #3 are to cheezy.

 

[ang1995]

I agree with KmH!

 

[D-B-J]

For me, #2 and #3 are to cheezy.

+1

 

[nicholaslawson]

thanks for the feedback, all 3 were done with long exposures. I've been interested in long exposure photography since doing it a few weeks ago in college. just trying to see what works and what doesn't. Getting the angles to match the ideas i've got in my head is always a problem for me at the moment.