C&C on second newborn shoot with twins

[LifterCatcher]

I know I'm a cynic, but....#3 creeps me out, and #4 (I shudder saying this) they look dead. [I know I'll get flamed for saying that, but I'm just being honest]

The rest, I LOVE as far as posing and composition. #1 is the best, and #5 I'd crop off the top bit where the arms peek out over the blanket, but that's nit-picky and my personal choice.

Won't comment on the editing since you said they were pre-processed.

Agree didn't want to say it but they look dead. It seems you tried to hard to make them pose and they do not look natural. I think your picture taking skills are great but the poses need work.