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C&C on some of my new pictures?

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Location #1 - Jetty Park, Cape Canaveral, Florida

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ThisthingIdontknowwhatitscalled-1.jpg

Littlecrabbaits-1.jpg

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Location #2 - Out my window :]
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Comment and Critique. The last picture is awesome
 
I like the second to last one best, the sky in the last one seems a bit overexposed.
 
#1 lacks contrast and sharpness. I like how the railings are leading the eyes to the subject, but he seems a bit to centered.
#2 kind of lacks a point of focus, and I feel like it's overblown. Also a bit to much sky?
#3 The horizon is kinda screwy, and the contrast is pretty low, making it kinda boring.
#4 I wish that the blue on the right side was less. If you could have moved to the left and got more of the crabs it could have been cool. Also wish you had gotten closer to them.
#5 Really cool concept. Looks like that bird might be flying into the storm or something. Like the framing, but if you did some PP contrasting it might help it
#6 Sky is pretty overblown obviously. The hawk is interesting though. I think it's cool that you could get so close to it.
 
#1 lacks contrast and sharpness. I like how the railings are leading the eyes to the subject, but he seems a bit to centered.
#2 kind of lacks a point of focus, and I feel like it's overblown. Also a bit to much sky?
#3 The horizon is kinda screwy, and the contrast is pretty low, making it kinda boring.
#4 I wish that the blue on the right side was less. If you could have moved to the left and got more of the crabs it could have been cool. Also wish you had gotten closer to them.
#5 Really cool concept. Looks like that bird might be flying into the storm or something. Like the framing, but if you did some PP contrasting it might help it
#6 Sky is pretty overblown obviously. The hawk is interesting though. I think it's cool that you could get so close to it.


Thanks for your comments!
 
I really like the hawk picture, but the colors are washed out and the sky is over exposed (as others have pointed out).

I've tried to clean it up a little using Lightroom. Hopefully you don't mind I edited your picture.

bird2-resizededited.jpg


What do you think?

what edits did you do? I can't find any differences
 

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