C&C Our Lady Queen of Heaven

[Light Guru]

I would greatly appreciate your thoughts on this image, Ive finally gotten around to giving it the time I felt it deserved. It was shot on 4x5 film the scanned and proceed.

 

[timor]

Nicely done, great image. I like the atmosphere of that place.
Of course I have a question; what is doing that tree at the edge of the image ? IMHO it is spoiling the smooth composition (very simple but nevertheless smooth). Was that unavoidable ?

 

[Mully]

Great shot and the mood is very nice .... the building is leaning ever so slightly to the right, maybe square it up some ...love the sky!

 

[Light Guru]

Nicely done, great image. I like the atmosphere of that place.
Of course I have a question; what is doing that tree at the edge of the image ? IMHO it is spoiling the smooth composition (very simple but nevertheless smooth). Was that unavoidable ?

Thanks I thought about removing the tree. I had already removed street signs power lines and a large propane tank. The tree was much lower on the list of things that were distracting.

Thanks for the input.

 

[timor]

Nicely done, great image. I like the atmosphere of that place.
Of course I have a question; what is doing that tree at the edge of the image ? IMHO it is spoiling the smooth composition (very simple but nevertheless smooth). Was that unavoidable ?

Thanks I thought about removing the tree. I had already removed street signs power lines and a large propane tank. The tree was much lower on the list of things that were distracting.

OK. Do it and let see.

 

[KmH]

I immediately found myself wishing you had gotten quite a bit closer.

For my taste the look is a bit to dark, or could use more light modeling.

 

[timor]

I immediately found myself wishing you had gotten quite a bit closer.

Well me to. I am a fan of 20mm (on FF, film).