C&C Please, Tear them apart.

Mr.SuperHero · Jan 16, 2009

From Yesterday and Today, All taken in below zero weather... Whatever.
Haha, I'm not sure how happy I am with any of them, But I'm learning so I have a little bit of an excuse.

Clancyz · Jan 16, 2009

wow, the fourth looks professional. i really like it, but the others dont do much for me

elementguy13 · Jan 16, 2009

I like them but I hope that isnt your school lit book

Mgw189 · Jan 16, 2009

I like the third shot bet of all of them. The shutter speed was a little long hence the blown out highlights from who knows what...LOL

The others dont do much for me at all.

Mr.SuperHero · Jan 16, 2009

Its old...
I hope, haha.

Mr.SuperHero · Jan 16, 2009

Mgw189 said:
I like the third shot bet of all of them. The shutter speed was a little long hence the blown out highlights from who knows what...LOL

The others dont do much for me at all.

Yeah it was tricky to get the shot I wanted, I only had like 2 of those things and the first one was a dud.

nmerrick · Jan 16, 2009

I like #4 and #2, but the others don't do anything much for me. #4 is especially good and very stylish.

Nigel

Marea · Jan 17, 2009

I like not only the execution of number four, but the creative thought behind it. The other's I find are all lacking something major. The first - the subject is too dim so the eye focuses on the left side of the photo which is boring. The second I just find that your subject of cracked stucco to be bland - no colour or anything special to entice the eye and the pillars in the background are distracting IMHO. The third isn't bad actually - just a touch over exposed - but I found that I wanted to look longer at that one.

Keep up the good work! Loved the 4th one. Clever.

christm · Jan 17, 2009

I like number 3 + 4. Nice work

Mr.SuperHero · Jan 17, 2009

Thanks for the C&C guys.
I went shooting today so I'll update you guys soon :tup:

Kileki · Jan 17, 2009

OK pics. #1 took me awhile to finally figure out what i was looking at, and im still not sure i know. #4 is the best. haha GREAT concept. and BTW...funny avatar jamal :lol:

ShutterSpeed · Jan 17, 2009

you want harsh?

ok. They're unoriginal and uninteresting except the fourth, which isn't framed very well.

The fourth is a nice concept.

I think you could've combined the concepts in 2 and 4. A low angle shot next to that pillar with the lens focused on burning book.