C&C please!

[phogan22]

Hi, so just wondering what you all think of these? I like that artistic blur kind of effect, as well as panning, just need to take more time. Thanks in advance!
-Paul

 

[Sherman Banks]

The motion blur in the first is pretty good. Might have been a little better to close up your aperture and go for a longer shutter so the bus would just leave a streak. But it's still a good shot. Your panning shot is still a little off though.

 

[kevinr214]

I like them both. Great Shots.

I agree with Banks that a longer shutter speed on the first would have made a cool streaking effect. But what you took is still nice. Disagree on the second shot. I think it is great. Slight blur which adds rather than subtracts from picture.

Thanks!
Kevin