C&C Please

[Guinness Man]

2 different shoots

thanks

 

[Rudha]

#1: this doesn't do much for me ..i think a tighter crop would be better. also don't hav people looking directly into the sun...cuz squinting is mot particularly attractive...

#2: this is better but i think her eyes should hav been in focus....also the bar or whatever in the background is kinda distracting ...but otherwise pretty.

 

[Guinness Man]

thank You.

I realized the "looking into the sun" thing After the shoot, lol live and learn I guess. The second one, its a beam from a wooden fence. It was my first shoot ever with a live person modeling. The original one was really under exposed. seen here:

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk161/scottall/Photography/Alyssa%20121509/DSC_0170.jpg

thanks for the input

 

[Wolverinepwnes]

i like the second one, but the first one is a bit overexposed! keep up the good work!!