C&C please

[attreides]

These were not taken with my dSLR, but I would still like to hear any comments on what could be better and how to make it better with my dSLR.

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Thanks!

 

[Alphaem]

Here is what I would do to those photos, hope this helps

http://digitalphotographydarkroom.com/?p=469&preview=true