C&C Please.

[Jef.Friday]

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Thanks.

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

Both images are classic, 'though not especially exciting or interesting studies in depth of field. While I'm not a fan of the angles, that's a personal choice. I will say that while both are significantly under-exposed, your monochrome conversion seems well done. Even though you've used a large aperture and have a shallow DoF, be cognizant of your backgrounds; there is still enough detail in #2 to make the background quite distracting.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Jef.Friday]

Hmm, Thanks!. Well they are under-expose, I edit them through my camera, took 'em in Raw form.

What's a good way to make them look better? edit them through photoshop?

Thanks!

 

[tirediron]

It looks like there's enough detail that you will be able to do some reasonable edits with levels/curves in Photoshop, but really, the best thing you can do is to get the exposure correct at the time you take the shot.

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

They both look very underexposed and out of focus to me, sorry.