C&C please

[swmocity]

its been a while since i posted pics... um,my tags dont seem to be working :/
edit: nvm i fixed it

 

[sunlou]

Like number 1 a lot,

2. a little ackward shadow across her chest... and you'll get the usual ... your horixon line is crooked... althoug i don't really mind it

3. nothing specific for me in number 3

 

[swmocity]

Like number 1 a lot,

2. a little ackward shadow across her chest... and you'll get the usual ... your horixon line is crooked... althoug i don't really mind it

3. nothing specific for me in number 3

@ number 2 and the shadow. yes i know lol...i just started using off camera flash...its kind of hard trying to balance out the light for both flashes... any suggestion? i have a canon 430ex and a vivitar 285 they both were set at 1/16

 

[ChevyBaby]

Number 2 looks miniature because of the DOF and shadows. Makes me chuckle - i like it!

 

[Sisco]

Except for the strange crop at mid breast,the off lighting,and the tilt....#2 is great.

 

[ChevyBaby]

Except for the strange crop at mid breast,the off lighting,and the tilt....#2 is great.

[holds back the laughter] ohh bitchy!

 

[RauschPhotography]

1) The tint isn't working for me, probably just personal preference.
2) Not sure exactly what you did in post, but it isn't working for me either. The sky looks fake, her arm is cut off, and the intentional angle is funky. (Mostly due to the arm crop)
3) Shouldn't have been this tight in, you cut off the rest of her head and her hair. Work on your crops.