C&C please

[iNick]

Took this at my college in Riverdale NY (The Bronx) i like it because it has 3 things going on at once while still being a simple photo, the tracks, the bridge, and the skyline of NYC all the way in the background. Let me know what you guys think! i love honest feedback :thumbup:
thanks
-Nick

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TracksCMSV2 by Dr.Mantis Toboggan, on Flickr[/IMG]

 

[LaFoto]

Well, to my personal dismay, this photo has a fourth thing going on that you are not mentioning, but which is predominant to my - an all neutral viewer's - eyes: the amount and "untidyness" of the foreground elements. Those, combined with the fact that your horizon is crooked, diminishes the impact of this photo on me considerably. Not to mention the greyness and lack of features of the sky.

 

[Ken Rockwell Fan]

I'd fix the horizon and convert this image to B&W.

 

[iNick]

thanks for the feedback guys! hows this?

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TracksCMSV2B&W by Dr.Mantis Toboggan, on Flickr[/IMG]