C&C please

[HomelessBoy]

I got my new dSLR and went to test it out.

1. Original



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[marmots]

broken links

 

[HomelessBoy]

Links fixed + Bump

 

[The_Traveler]

Your vignette slider is stuck on 'way way much'; better have it fixed before it ruins your reputation.

 

[Virtuosos]

Your vignette slider is stuck on 'way way much'; better have it fixed before it ruins your reputation.

Lol....


Your horizon is horribly tilted, the subject itself is slightly underexposed in the first photo...looks better in the 2nd though (im assuming it was edited, in which case you should try reshooting it and get it to look that vibrant without having to edit). If you were going for the tilted horizon, then ignore that first comment :/

but yeah, color looks much better in the 2nd one.

 

[HomelessBoy]

Well thanks for the comments. I didn't actually noticed the tilted horizon thing. I just fixed it the second photo but the pole is now tilted...

 

[Virtuosos]

To be honest, you can probablly shift around some and eliminate that pole al-to-gether.

 

[Virtuosos]

Btw...a way you can fix the color is the White Balance. I bet it was set on auto, you should try instead of putting it to shade/direct sunlight at -1 or -2...takes the over-all blueness out and it might look better (or different atleast..would allow you to compare the two). Something else I noticed is the faucet leaking the water: that actually looks pretty good, shame it got lost in the editing


Anyways, these are just my opinions. Take them for what they are worth (free...i don't charge!).