C&C pls.

[8ball]

I shot this rigth after a building went up in flames just want to know what you guys think

 

[AprilEye]

I happen to like it. Nice post-Halloween shot.

 

[clanthar]

Nice image, smoke is always hard to capture.

You need to normalize the tone response (Levels).

Take Care,
Joe

 

[ayeelkay]

^nice edit.
I really like this photo, it did however need more contrast - like clanthar's edit. It's interesting because you would never know it was taken after a fire..just looks like a foggy dreary morning.