C&C this please its my first portrait :)

[er111a]

thank You

 

[ghpham]

Hmm..his face seems to blend in with the background as well as his hair. There is no "separation". The t-shirt looks blown. I don't get why he is wearing his t-shirt in such a manner. Did you take this photo handheld? look to me like there is a little camera shake as the picture seem a bit blurred. Only lighting was flash?

 

[Weaving Wax]

The highlights are blown out and the shadows are too dark. There is a halo around the man as well.....

 

[FattyMcJ]

Oh...er111a...c'mon bud. You can do better than this.

This shot looks "accidental" and not intended. Goofy exposure, poor composition...swing and a miss.

:waiting:

 

[er111a]

Oh...er111a...c'mon bud. You can do better than this.

This shot looks "accidental" and not intended. Goofy exposure, poor composition...swing and a miss.

:waiting:

yes your right sorry I was just wondering what yall thought, I tried to fix it alittle bit in pp, but I guess you cant fix a bad photo, lol that day I was just taking photos for fun