C&C Two shots by picture taker

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  1. thisisdup

    thisisdup TPF Noob!

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    Hello everyone, I have been analyzing professional photographers work.I am looking for ways to turning my picture taker skills to professional photographer's skills so I need your help. I really glad to be member of community and I really love follow your projects.
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    Welcome to the forum! It might help to tell us a little about what sort of photography you're interested in, where you're located, and what type of gear you use. One issue I notice with both images you've posted here is focus. In the flower, there doesn't seem to be any, that is, the whole image seems soft, while the camera does have a clear point of focus, but may not in the right place.
     
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    The flower shot could have better balance, and the focus is not sharp.

    The camera shot has some distracting elements in the background.
     
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    Thanks for your answers both are good points. People and landscape photography shine out for me . I use canon 700d with ef-s 18-55lll lens. I think that it doesn't have much af point compared to same level nikon . Both images I selected af point manually (only one point) because it was selecting irrelevant points @tirediron @Designer

    First : iso1600 f/5,6 1/25sec
    Second : iso400 f/5,0 0.3sec
     
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    I also feel like the flower shot is oversaturated by a slight amount.
     
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