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[pborgbarthet]

Not sure if I like this.. please crit.

Thanks

 

[deggimatt]

It looks a bit out of focus.

 

[Trenton Romulox]

I agree with the above poster, it is out of focus a bit.

And perhaps a straight BW would work better here.

And I really can't tell what you were trying to say with the picture, there is no real clear message.

 

[xfloggingkylex]

I dont think its so much out of focus as it is poor quality from the kit lens combined with a long exposure in which the subject may have moved ever so slightly.

For the sharpest pictures out of the kit lens, shoot at F8 or F11, F36 will lose a lot of the sharpness as well as contrast and tends to make pictures look somewhat BLAH. Also, with F11 you wouldn't need such a long exposure and there would be less chance of any subject movement.

 

[pborgbarthet]

Thanks for the advice Kyle. I'll try it out and re-post the result.