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[amolitor]

Daddy left the camera on B&W after doing some other stuff.

 

[Mach0]

Cute girl. My only gripe is the hand is partially cut off. I wanted to see what was in her hand.

 

[MLeeK]

I love the highlight along her profile. I wish the leading line of the rail added to it. I tried to make it, but it's really just a distraction for me. I feel like her face is a bit too dark in the scheme of the black and white.

 

[Rick58]

Very nice. I too would have liked to see her entire hand, but it's not a deal breaker for me. It still a very nice photo.

 

[charlie76]

Well, the exposure is very nice and the girl is very pretty! But the image itself Is pretty boring...composition is pretty generic...as well as the setting. But again...I think you nailed the exposure

 

[paigew]

I like this! I love the inquisitive look you captured and how the light is sweeping across her face. I have never shot in b/w so I am not sure how much play you have BUT I would like to see the highlights on her face a bit brighter and a little more darkness and contrast in the background.

quick edit

 

[fotomumma09]

What a beautiful daughter you have! I agree with paigew about highlights on her face, but I love the feeling of the photo and her expression is so sweet!

 

[amolitor]

Thank you, all, for your input!

 

[cgipson1]

Beautiful shot.. lovely girl! This would have been nice in either portrait format, or not as tight... would not have lost that hand....