Car and the city

[Tom23]

Couple of shots I took yesterday...on my way to parking lot



On the bus by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr



Diner by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr


On the parking lot



350Z by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr



350Z by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr



350Z by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr

 

[lennon33x]

1-3 are pretty solid. I like the general feel of them. 4 doesn't seem as intriguing to me. 5 is tricky. It's not centered, but the problem is that the parking lines are too centered with the car (obviously nothing you can control...unless it's your car). And the breaks in the wall lines are uneven, within the frame. Otherwise, I like the feel of it

 

[Tom23]

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I did a car shoot for my friend, so I was able to re-position the car...there was no perfect symmetrical part of the wall and the whole parking lot was slightly tilted down so I just went with what I got. I didn't have a tripod with me, only the 10 inch manfrotto pocket, so I jammed it up on one of the supermarket carts and I had a pretty flexible dolly to drive around and test the angles

 

[lennon33x]

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I did a car shoot for my friend, so I was able to re-position the car...there was no perfect symmetrical part of the wall and the whole parking lot was slightly tilted down so I just went with what I got. I didn't have a tripod with me, only the 10 inch manfrotto pocket, so I jammed it up on one of the supermarket carts and I had a pretty flexible dolly to drive around and test the angles

I looked at this one again. I would probably have placed the car in front of the parking lines, to block them, and then turned the car sideways (maybe 30-45 deg.). It would eliminate the parking lines and then you could still have the metal wall in the background. Exposure was spot on, just the lines on the ground that throw it out of balance

 

[Derrel]

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I did a car shoot for my friend, so I was able to re-position the car...there was no perfect symmetrical part of the wall and the whole parking lot was slightly tilted down so I just went with what I got. I didn't have a tripod with me, only the 10 inch manfrotto pocket, so I jammed it up on one of the supermarket carts and I had a pretty flexible dolly to drive around and test the angles

Very resourceful!!!

You seem to have pretty good camera technique. These look "clean" to me.

 

[TheNevadanStig]

I like them. Nice little Z!

 

[Tom23]

Thanks. I'm planning on making a short film with this movie, something more interesting than mere car video clips with someone's music in the back...I'm currently into "daydreaming" mode figuring things out.


350 by Tomislav Mavrovic, on Flickr

 

[Shipman]

Nice shots and nice z dude