Carly - Boho Shoot (first shoot with the 5D!)

[jowensphoto]

Comments/critique always appreciated. I'm a little unsure of the colors, editing from my laptop; will check on calibrated monitor tomorrow, but any suggestions appreciated

Also, I'm now a full frame junkie. Shooting with the 5D classic body was so much fun!

 

[sscarmack]

You have a dirty sensor???


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[jowensphoto]

It needs to be cleaned
Bought used off eBay.

 

[paigew]

I love these so much Jess! My favorite session from you...ever! You are rocking that camera!


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[e.rose]

Saw you post these on Facebook, Jess.

Overall, I really like what you're doing. :sillysmi:

Nitpicks:

1 (and 2). Throw out the sepia-toned version of this one. The original edit is much, much better. The sepia-toned one looks... newbie-ish.

3. Needs to be a hair lighter. I appreciate what you're going for here, but the exposure needs to come up a bit.

4. Edit out your sensor dirt. -- Also the blacks are way too black. I'd pull them up a bit.

5. Love it.

6. Love it.

:hug::

 

[jowensphoto]

Thanks Paige, I've been dying to do a shoot like this!

Thanks for the feedback Emily! I am going to take a second look at those on an an external monitor today. I swear I edited out the dirt, but it must have been on the first edit Lol

 

[jowensphoto]

Mo betta?

 

[e.rose]

Mo betta?View attachment 77031

Yes. Now pull down the blacks a TIIIIIIIIIIIIIINY, tiny pinch to compensate in everything else being brought up, and you're golden.

But this is better than the other. :sillysmi:

 

[FITBMX]

I like them, They have a nice vintage look!!!

 

[CdTSnap]

Love them, make me wanna get stoned lol. bloody hippys

 

[frommrstomommy]

I really like the idea here.. I'd love to do a shoot like this.. I have a bunch pinned on pinterest. =P lol

I would love to play with editing #3!

 

[frommrstomommy]

 

[jowensphoto]

Can I ask what you did? That looks really nice - exactly where my mind was ("It's like you can read miiiinds, man." lol).

I'll have some more soon, this girl was so much fun to work with. I feel like she was the person I'd been waiting for to do this shoot.

 

[jowensphoto]

 

[jowensphoto]

Errrr the colors look much better in my PS window than in this post