theres nothing overly exciting about these... they seem to be washed out in some parts.. and there are some really bad highlights, either from the Sun, or from a flash, I can't really tell. Keep at it though! Everyone has to start somewhere
I am liking the second one. I'd send it through noise reduction software to soften it a little and help out the bokeh. The tilt of the background feels slightly uncomfy, but it could work. keep shooting!