I think that an apostrophe in "Rothmans" would be good.
Trying to be concise yet gentle is tough ... okay, concise ,,, It looks like a snapshot taken standing at eye level. This was a great opportunity for creativity ... shoot up, shoot down, shoot left, shoot right, shoot close, shoot wide, shoot a combo of things ... but don't take a snapshot.
I am not attacking you, just being direct. Is this a shot featuring Rothmans or the British Car Club? If it was for the car club I'd try a shot with Rothmans' spoiler framing the right side and the ERC car framing the left, shooting low and up into the British Racing Club signage.
If I was shooting the Rothmans car then I'd get very close with a wide angle to emphasis the car shooting up and shooting down .... and probably show more front ... and/or real close and at an angle to shoot the Rothmans on the spoiler with a wide lens letting the car trail away and fill the frame.
Good Luck,
Gary