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For those who don't know.. I'm cleaning out the crap from my website and coming across images I can't decide whether to keep up or not...

So here goes... Why does it work? why does in not? Any input is appreciated.

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For me, it doesn't work because the LED lights grab all the attention and the musicians are too low in the frame.

Also, I can clearly see that there is a lot of movement going on; the singer in particular looks very animated, but they have no space to move about in.
 
Cool. You guys confirmed my suspicions that this image is terrible :icon_thumright: thanks!!

I don't know why it ever went up on my site in the first place. :soapbox::icon_crazy::whip:
 
For me, it doesn't work because the LED lights grab all the attention and the musicians are too low in the frame.

Also, I can clearly see that there is a lot of movement going on; the singer in particular looks very animated, but they have no space to move about in.

^What he said.

IF I were gonna keep it, it would be a different version of it, with the singer and the LED lights at the top cropped out, maybe a little extra "empty" space cloned in then, to the left of the guitar player (photo right), and just enough of the LED light at the top left to show a red glow but not the actual light. That would focus in on the strongest part of this image, imo.
 
I like that method.. but I have this problem where I obsessively doubt all of my images so I'd never have anything to show if I did that

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I like that method.. but I have this problem where I obsessively doubt all of my images so I'd never have anything to show if I did that

:bom:
For most of us here, (including moi), that would be a good start.

If you're using the website as a marketing tool only display the best of the best. It is better to only have ten exceptional image than ten exceptional images watered-down by association with ten not-so-exceptional. Dilution will kill you.
 

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