comment and critique!

[regentmilo]

Hello All!
I am fairly new to photography in general (i've been shooting regularly for about 6 months)
Just looking to get better so would appreciate comments for improvement, criticism, helpful suggestions, or ideas for future.
Thanks,
miles

 

[VegasPhotoNut]

#1 looks off center/crooked. #2 crops the feet and tail. #3 is just the top half of a beer. Not much to critique on here..

 

[Dagwood56]

#1 - Your horizon is tipped to the left. You can easily straighten this in editing.

#2 - I agree that the feet and tail shouldn't be cropped off, but what I feel is needed more is some fill flash so the cats features can be seen.

#3 - I'm assuming you were going for the condensation on the bottle and foam above the label on the neck? But the lighting on the bottle is harsh and so the foam and condensation are both blown out and have lost detail. Also it would be better to see the entire bottle and even a partially filled glass sitting next to it would improve the composition.