Comments, Suggestions? :)

[OneTruthRemains]

Looking for some input on a few pictures I've worked on recently. I plan on doing a few more "walk around until I find something awesome" trips around town. Maybe some suggestions here could help me then? And yes, I know that the first one is completely different from the rest..

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[Trever1t]

#4 has real potential. Nice composition, she's focused. It could use some reflected or fill light to her face.

 

[KmH]

Lighting, lighting, and lighting, particularly fill lighting for back lit subjects.