Common Primrose Willow

[Dioboleque]

Aside from the sticks, anyone have any opinions on these. I'd like general comments & technical critique. Thanks! :sillysmi:

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[darkpbstar]

there sure is alot of unattractive green leaves with such a small flower, although the yellow is nice. You got the composition good by not placing the flower directly in the middle. I personally like #2 better, and I like the blurred out stick in #2. #2 has less of the cluttered greenery, if you know what I mean. nice shots though

 

[Dioboleque]

Thanks for the comment! :sillysmi:

 

[tirediron]

Very nice focus and exposure. I think I'd like to see a closer crop of #2; the positioning is good, but there's too much empty space below/left for the size of the main subject,

 

[Dioboleque]

Thanks for the comment! :sillysmi: