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Photography... how to speak from the soul
Please feel free to criticize my work...

my favorite animal = man:
"glamour 3" Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/45 sec f/3,5 focal length 6,3mm iso 400 flash did not fire
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god's paintings:
" beginning and end" Nikon D60 1/320 sec at f/13 focal lenght 35mm iso100 flash did not fire lens 18,0-55,0 f/3,5-5,6
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hese are on film Zenit-E lens Helios 44-2 f/2-16 focal length 58mm scanner epson dx4400
photos are a bit darkened due to the scanner
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god's paintings:
going back home Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/240 sec f/5,6 focal lenght 21,3mm iso 64 flash did not fire
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the street:
"sitting under light 1" Nikon D60 1/250 sec at f/8,0 focal lenght 18mm iso100 flash did not fire lens 18,0-55,0 f/3,5-5,6
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god's paintings:
"tree of life" Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/300 sec f/5,6 focal lenght 6,3mm iso 64 flash did not fire
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"lonely" Nikon D60 1/320 sec at f/14 focal lenght 55mm iso100 flash did not fire
lens 18,0-55,0 f/3,5-5,6
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my favorite animal = man:
"curious 2" Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/90 sec f/3,5 focal length 6,3mm iso 800 flash did not fire
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glamour
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architecture:
"Ruins 3" Sony DSC-S650 1/160 sec at f/5,6 focal lenght 5,8mm iso100 flash did not fire
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"Ruins 2" Sony DSC-S650 1/400 sec at f/2,8 focal lenght 5,8mm iso64 flash did not fire
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"Home" Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/60 sec at f/3,5 focal lenght 6,3mm iso100 flash did not fire
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"Struggle" Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/20 sec at f/4,0 focal lenght 9,8mm iso64 flash did not fire
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There's a lot and I'm only going to comment on the first.

It's very reminiscent of Annie Leibowitz's Pirelli Tire calendar photos that she did. I'm not sure if she's ever shot for their calendar more than once, but the ones I'm talking about ended up very under exposed and it worked out very well.
 
There is a lot here to look at... I'll comment on a few

2) I don't know if I like the sun flaring from her vagina. Instead of looking at a nicely composed silhouette my eye is drawn to her crouch. Maybe thats what you were going for?

3) The dog is in the middle of the frame. try moving it to the left or right a little

The young child and the black and white woman seem a little washed out in places. Also there are places where the sun hits the arches that are a little blown out. Try burning the area to see if you can get a little more detail.

I really like your compositions. Besides a few little things all of these are pretty good.
 
There's a lot and I'm only going to comment on the first.
It's very reminiscent of Annie Leibowitz's Pirelli Tire calendar photos that she did. I'm not sure if she's ever shot for their calendar more than once, but the ones I'm talking about ended up very under exposed and it worked out very well.
There is a lot here to look at... I'll comment on a few
2) I don't know if I like the sun flaring from her vagina. Instead of looking at a nicely composed silhouette my eye is drawn to her crouch. Maybe thats what you were going for?
3) The dog is in the middle of the frame. try moving it to the left or right a little
The young child and the black and white woman seem a little washed out in places. Also there are places where the sun hits the arches that are a little blown out. Try burning the area to see if you can get a little more detail.
I really like your compositions. Besides a few little things all of these are pretty good.

sorry guys for posting so much i had to move them from another thread ...
Village Idiot= it is an honour for me to be mentioned in the same sentence with such a great photographer. Thank you
1986= yes that was what I was gooing for ...that is one of my most disscused photos and it s one of my favorite because as I have stated in it s title it represents "beginning and end"...the dog well thats shoot on film one of my earlier work and I was more conserned with the dof and the focus rather then the possition...regarfind the arches I wanted that look, and for a grunge like photo is it good , a mean do I have to get capture all details? regarding the child and the girl in b&w I do see what you mean thanks
Good luck guys
 
because the first thread became a big joke and there was no feedback regarding my work..there was no constructive discussion... I have asked the staff of tpf to delete that thread... here are a couple more photos...

"letter to my lover"

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all photos are taken with Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/15 sec f/3,5 focal length 6,3mm iso 200 flash did not fire
 
love the noise and vignetting .....dark stufff
P.S: - i hope i got the terms right.....
 
thank you ... yes the terms are corect
 
I really like shiny vagina shot, lol.
 
I like most of them... The sunny vagina is awesome... Kind of contradicts the saying " Where the sun don't shine "... lol.. nice job
 
thanks ... i m glad you like my work
 
from this day i will forever be fire crotch man ... that s cool... thank you Mugen80
 
doorway to another world... mine

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Fujifilm FinePixS5800 1/60 sec f/3,5 focal length 6,3mm iso 200 flash did not fire
 

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