Contest Shoot, Didn't Win, but Critique WANTED, Please :D

[mannysantoyo]

I tried uploading the photos and they weren't going through, oh well, let me know your opinion please

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Julia-1-3 by N3CR0SAG3, on Flickr


JuliaWP-1-3 by N3CR0SAG3, on Flickr


JuliaWP-1-5 by N3CR0SAG3, on Flickr
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[tevo]

JuliaWP-1-5 | Flickr - Photo Sharing! Favorite one - Poses dont feel natural to me though. And the one you linked to is oversaturated/processed imo.

 

[MissCream]

Some of them are out of focus and you cut her toes off in the first one. I also prefer her with the jacket on.

 

[mishele]

If you have the photos directly in the thread you'll get more comments.

Pick a photo
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Let me know if you still have problems....=)

 

[mannysantoyo]

Thank you

If you have the photos directly in the thread you'll get more comments.

Pick a photo
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Let me know if you still have problems....=)

 

[mannysantoyo]

Thank you, i was still getting used to my 50mm its manual focus, sorry about that, and i know i did i felt the toes werent a huge issue,

Some of them are out of focus and you cut her toes off in the first one. I also prefer her with the jacket on.

 

[mannysantoyo]

Thank you, its one of my favorites as well, still learning the editing part.

JuliaWP-1-5 | Flickr - Photo Sharing! Favorite one - Poses dont feel natural to me though. And the one you linked to is oversaturated/processed imo.

 

[Tiberius47]

White balance seems a bit off in them...

 

[tirediron]

What was your intent here? What sort of 'look' were you going for? As mentioned there a lot of technical issues with the image, and the poses and composition appear awkward and forced.