Coteaux Du Languedoc

[MyNameIsChris]

Wine.

My first shot at commercial-looking photography. PLEASE give me constructive criticism, I know it needs work but I can't put my finger on what it is. Help me out!

Soft box to right
Translucent umbrella to left
430ex bounced off ceiling

 

[Kittyy]

Kind of plain. Glad you stuck with the white background though.

 

[MyNameIsChris]

Kind of plain. Glad you stuck with the white background though.

Yeah, I think I should have poured some into a wine glass and put it next to it, or something like that.

 

[MyNameIsChris]

Anyone else? Any C&C is very appreciated.

 

[Ls3D]

Looks like the softbox could be pushed upstage to move that harsh highlight back. A rim / fill from the back right might help fill out the darker edges of the bottle - but I'm a more a virtual lighting guy... so I'm just guessing.

Is there a green cast in the label or is the label actually light green? If it is white I would work to preserve it.

-Shea