Could you please comment on B&W Exposition... baby shoot

[sunlou]

I find hard to post correct exposures on black and white, please comment on these...

thanks


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[sunlou]

oops 1st one should not be there...

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Nice. If I could say anything constructive... It might be to add a bit more contrast?

And also I think that the third one is a bit "too" close up.

 

[edouble]

I do not like any of these B&W simply because the little person's eyes are black. IMO baby's eyes should not be black - lacking life.