You got the land, you got the sky. They're doing different things, they're not connected in any interesting way. I see no echoes of shapes in one versus the other, I see no relationship between them, really.
Then you got some other stuff on the horizon line which is not pulling its weight, it's just there.
I feel like the verticals, the poles on each side of the road, are trying to pull the sky and land together, but it ain't happening, they need some kind of help there. I think with some different cloud structure, this could be excellent.