Couple abstract - would love some feedback

[BlueCobalt]

first time trying some abstract, how do you think i did?

 

[Braineack]

it's still pretty obvious that it's fireworks. Maybe crop them a touch?

I was fooling with this not too long ago: https://www.flickr.com/photos/80607199@N08/11443578795/in/photostream/

 

[BlueCobalt]

ya was from the 4th

 

[Mandolin]

I really love the colors in #1. I agree with Braineack that they could benefit from a crop.

 

[BlueCobalt]

im not sure how to crop them. i thought they were pretty tight already

 

[astroNikon]

Great Job .. excellent concept.
I never thought of doing that for fireworks. Now I can't wait until next year !!

I did some really weird abstracts of a campfire. Which was more than just zooming
http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/general-gallery/364554-campfire-abstracts.html
with the complete collection here:
https://www.flickr.com/photos/100677477@N08/sets/72157645602631946/

 

[BlueCobalt]

bump

 

[ristretto]

You did good. This image as a background merged with something more, (e.g a figure in silhouette), could be interesting.

first time trying some abstract, how do you think i did?

 

[Derrel]

I like #1 a lot,OP. GREAT job on the campfire abstracts, AstroNikon!