Couple of edits i did today.

[ghache]

I think im getting better, why i say that? because think my keepers/trash ratio is getting higher all the time shoot after shoot and i think its a good sign!



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[ghache]

I just noticed the dust on her shirt in the first one....that will be removed

 

[Robin Usagani]

Nice man. I think it would improve significantly if she ways maybe 3 ft farther from the background. The shadow will drop a lot more.

 

[ghache]

Nice man. I think it would improve significantly if she ways maybe 3 ft farther from the background. The shadow will drop a lot more.

Yup, for this shot i was going for the shadow, but i didnt catch it all, and i used an umbrella box which is not harsh enought to create a stonger and more defined shadow. i need to get a beauty dish for that strobe.

 

[MWG]

Really liking the second shot except for the shadow on the right side of her nose. Would be perfect if not for that. Nice work.

 

[Robin Usagani]

How about applying some post processing make up . Let me know if you are interested so I can add it to my before and after portfolio .
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