Crayola photo shoot lol C&C plz

[wgp1987]

I bought a 500 watt light and a white sheet. I took a quick shot. What do you guys think?

 

[TJ K]

I don't really like the shadows in the shot and the creases in the back of the sheet kind of distract me.
TJ

 

[DubDeez.]

the shadow is distracting and you could probably clone that and the crease out.

 

[cfeldman10]

Cool shot. I like that you used colours that compliment one another.
I would just say that the red is a little over exposed

 

[cfeldman10]

I actually JUST took some pictures of crayons today for my photo assignment and also used a sheet of paper
Would be cool to post my picture and compare the two, but it's on film so I gotta scan it or something.

 

[Layspeed]

It would be a nice picture if the shadow wasn't there. The crease is minor, but noticeable. And...that's an orange crayon, not red right?!? Or are my eyes that f***ed up!??

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

It's under exposed, the horizon is crooked, it's out of focus, and it looks like a test shot. But on the other hand, your watermark looks well thought out. :thumbup:

 

[wgp1987]

This mainly was a test shot. I just bought a king sized sheet and was steaming the wrinkles out until i broke the head of my steamer. I knew you guys would complain about the lines and wrinkles, but what is so bad about the shadow? I thought everything is in focus? I focused on the crayon tip.

 

[wgp1987]

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