+1 on Kundalini's and sm4him's comments! The centered horizon, and lack of contrast kill it for me.
-5 internets for all of you.
What exactly is wrong with the horizon where it is? Where else would you put it? When will you people stop with these silly rules, many of which don't even apply to square format? Just look at the image for christ sake, and not "uh oh! rule of thirds say you should have..." I am not even sure where this "horizon in the center" rule came from, I never heard of it until recently.
Square format lends itself to centering, diagonals from the corners and composition based on triangles rather than rectangles. One reason why shooting in a square format s so difficult is because the compositional guidelines are so different.
Second, this is a low key image, not a low contrast image. There is plenty of contrast there, all the tones are there, there is nothing lacking at all. You people seriously need to learn what contrast
is. Just because there is not a lot of blacks does not mean that the image is lacking in contrast. Would you have preferred the shadows be plugged up? Again, LOOK at the image, not for a laundry list of broken rules.
Comments like these are embarrassing.