I'm trying to stop giving technichal tips or critiques. I'm starting to think that errors in photography simply don't exist. According to me nobody can tell you if there's an error in your photography, since photography is just the attempt to show to others the vision we have inside and..only you are able to know how exactly your photography matches the inner vision. But everybody can tell if they get a message from your photo or not. I don't get any message from this photo. Do you, Imageginary?
Before just pressing the shutter release...ask yourself WHY you are taking that photo and WHAT are you going to say.