Post images to this site, or point us to specific images. A general portfolio assessment is beyond the purview of this forum
Then ask for specific comments or critique. Best is if you seek out photographers rather than the general public. A lot of members here are still in the technique acquisition phase of their photography (or worse, the gear acquisition phase) so the comments you might get will be of little targeted use. If you seek out people who's work you respect it's fun to exchange pointers.