Critique please, car photo

[SLPhotography]

So I did a photo shoot recently. I've been trying to work on my overall composition, and also focusing on not "over-editing", while still getting a good looking result. This was my favorite picture of the day. Please leave some feedback on what you think. What is good? What is bad. Be as harsh as you like, you wont hurt my feelings :mrgreen:

Thanks all!

 

[ronlane]

IMHO, the cars are underexposed.

 

[Shipman]

Slightly underexposed and the focus isnt wide enough. I like the positions and set up but the cars are too dark and the sky is too light.

 

[Photo Lady]

just too dark to me.. would make the cars stunning with the light

 

[pixmedic3 3]

just a quick edit. little exposure and highlight work. nothing major.


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[tirediron]

I like the location and composition ('though if you'd angled the cars just a bit more so that we could the sides better that would have made them even stronger) but as mentioned, the lighting really hurts these. You needed a LOT mroe light in the foreground; probably three fairly large lights, big modifiers and a polarizing filter to deal with the reflections this would have been a GREAT shot.

 

[SLPhotography]

Thanks for all the feedback guys! Keep it coming! Also, thanks for the edit pixmedic. Really puts others criticisms into perspective. Much better looking shot.